She was quick with me twice,
And dismissive twice.
And so utterly confused, uncertain, and befuddled once
That all I could think to do was
Walk away…
Me? I’m jus dancin.
She was quick with me twice,
And dismissive twice.
And so utterly confused, uncertain, and befuddled once
That all I could think to do was
Walk away…
Me? I’m jus dancin.
I’m thinking of changing she was quick with me to short with or snapped at.
Not sure if I’d change it. On one hand I like “quick with” as it lends itself to a little broader a meaning than I feel “short/snapped” does, but “short with” or “snapped with” give it a bit of a snappier feel. Depends what you’re going for, I suppose. If snappier/more abrupt, then “short/snapped.”
It was just compared to NIN Me, I’m Not.
Which is an awesome fucking song, so I’m happy to be compared to it.
The 14 minute Olof Dreijer Remix from Y34RZ3R0R3M1X3D is even better, but I don’t have a link handy and I’m to lazy to look.
@sexweakrecovery
Yeah. It’s a struggle between the looser interpretation of quick and the more concrete feel of snap or short. I’m leaning towards keeping quick, but I also want it to be fairly obvious what the line refers to…but, the openness of quick does give more insight into the entirety of the characters outside the once incident.
So, I’m gonna let it lay for a while and see what happens.