I made one change.
And then I shuddered
(with delight).
I kept that edit.
I made one change and shuddered with delight. I kept the edit.
I kept the one that made me shudder.
I made one change.
And then I shuddered
(with delight).
I kept that edit.
I made one change and shuddered with delight. I kept the edit.
I kept the one that made me shudder.