Delightful Edit

I made one change.
And then I shuddered
(with delight).
I kept that edit.

I made one change and shuddered with delight. I kept the edit.

I kept the one that made me shudder.

Dear HULK

Dear Hulk,

Are you so Smash! all the time because you are eternally cursed to read relentlessly regenerating imitations of the same schlock, or are you cursed with good taste and inquisitiveness?

Sincerely,